First Love

Memories of how a first love feels.

Peeking at you while writing down silly notes

heart shapes in red pen at the end of your name

thinking maybe of a first date

or you giving me roses

or them, seeing us together, teasing

with me blushing and you smiling

all, while the teacher's voice is fading

in the background of my daydreaming.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

How well I remember this sort of scenario....although it was over 40 years ago. Scribbing in the notebook...hearts and flowers....is the teacher calling my name? :) Adorably romantic words. Lydi**

[EloisaWrites]

Thank you for always taking the time to review my work. This was actually written for my little sister who is starting to have crushes. I was reminded of my own hearts-on-names moments. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"the teacher's voice is fading

in the background of my daydreaming"

Congratulations on your first love...Bravo

[EloisaWrites]

Thank you for taking the time to visit and left a review. I am humbled. :)

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...:).......................

[zainul]

Sounds good.
I wonder how it happened in real life.

[EloisaWrites]

Thank you for your kind review.
It actually happened exactly like that - I daydreamed a lot because of my first love so I made it the point of the poem. Haha.
Again, I am honored for the time you gave. :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear Writer.
I feel very glad to learn about the actual affair of your life.
Enjoy lovely life and sharing as poems!