Eye Staring

Eye Staring

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

Don't stare at me

My eyes are sure to avoid yours

They will produce endless fear if met with yours.

You can tell a lot by a person's eyes

Just listen to them.

They glisten in the light above

Twinkling like the brightest stars.

You continue to stare

Ugh...would you stop that already?

You dont seem to detect my anger and frustration

Just staring at me...

© 2009 I Am Svetlana


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Perhaps the person is blind and not looking at you at all.
Just a thought.

Nice write. Thanks

Posted 13 Years Ago


Is it possible you have been caught in a lie and don't want to confront that other person? That's what I got out of it. Nice little poem in free verse. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hmm, got a stalker on you? :D

Nah, this was good. Free-verse worked well. Great subject, although I don't know why you talk about someone staring at you and then start talking about eyes in general?

Oh well, it was still good! Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

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