The Right Ending

The Right Ending

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

The road we

All walk today

Is a dark one.

We choose to follow its path

But must go no further.

It is now

Every person for themselves.

Teaming up ends up in betrayal

There is no complete trust.

We are now on our own

And must choose the right ending.

© 2010 I Am Svetlana


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I liked it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


It's tragic that those of us reading this will all see its truth. You've expressed it well. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I wrote a piece about a road once... I must try to dig it out. Sometimes we are alone on that road but the joy is when someone skips up and takes our hand - be they friend, family or lover. At the next crossroads, I hope you get back to the lit road... it is a wonderful place. (p.s. 'it's' on the fourth line should have no apostrophe.)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Interesting message mon amie... It is true, we are stuck on a road of ash and dust. Perhaps... we can no longer lean on others, perhaps we cannot trust. Teaming up may end in betrayal but when we have nothing left but the road in front of us, I personally would prefer to walk it with an enemy then on my own. Enemies can become friends, betrayers can become allies, but nothing cannot become something.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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