My Favorite Dream

This is the dream
Where I meet you.
Seeing your face light up
As your door opens.
Picturing your smile
And those tears of love.
My heart lies in Pittsburgh
Where it is cradled
In your very palms.
My favorite dream
Forever, my love.

Reviews

[foolsrush]

This is a wonderful piece. Very well put together.

[r]

this is yet another example of how you write beautifully! nice work

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a simple but wonderful poem about love and dreams. The flow is nicely done.

[itsjustme]

ah, yes i remember some of those dreams. very refreshing to wake up and have your loves face imprinted on your mind through a dream *_*

[J. C. Koch]

I've had similar dreams, they're quite nice aren't they :)