I Want To Be

The pretty girl

The smart girl

The girl that everyone notices

The girl everybody knows

The flower

The thorn

The lover

The smile I put on people's faces

Reviews

[TamerQtaish]

A very interesting writing you have going on here,
The title simple, and the words straight in meaning,
I love that simplicity in anything!

About being someone, well... That's up to you!
If you want to be a fighter, you fight!
If you want to be a lover, you love
... And on
If you do what the one you want to be is doing you become that one!
Anyway that's my humble point of view.

Lovely piece,
All the best,
Tamer

[Aiden Alyx]

Believe it or not, you are this. message me if you dont understand where im going with this

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I think ..that perhaps we can be all those things to someone , but not everyone..and maybe sometimes when we are that to someone we do not even know it.. anyhow..yes I think so too, at least for someone anyone to see you as all those things..

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I believe that everyone has these feelings, but are you pretty :]

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

Simple, and relatable.
Great job!