Safe Pain

I didn't want to hurt you.

But I had to

Enable to keep safe from trouble.

How I wish to see you

But can't.

My heart pains

But I am living.

Reviews

[Jennifer Pennington]

Sometimes the best thing for you or someone else is what hurts the most. Very well done and nicely portrayed. Good job!

[Lunar Lightning]

This spoke to me so much. I had to do something similer, hurt someone to save them. She holds it against me now, but I'd do it again. Very nicely written.

Luna

[Hippy]

hmm pain caused to another to keep them from worse pain that s a good deed of you even if it hurt someone but pain is nessacary and this person will live and learn from there experince hopefully

[Broken.]

I understand where you're coming from in this, and of course, I myself, have had the same thoughts. I love to keep a little to the imagination by not quite clarifying the "you's" and "It's" in poems that are even short like these. Great piece.

[r]

rory cj frankson..................... SHUT UP!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

See others like and appreciate the knife hey... or straight razor,, maybe?

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, such a few words. Awesome!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You told a a tremendous story with few words. It's a bit of a tear jerker.