I Am Gone

I am not here

I am not there.

Not anywhere.

 

People have searched

They can't find me.

 

I am untraceable.

 

I don't need to be here.

That's why I've gone away.

 

It doesn't matter where I am

Because I am sure

Not to be there.

 

I am gone.

Reviews

[f**k you]

I love this. Perfectly simple, yet profound. I can really relate to this feeling. And I agree with Guinevere, you ARE alive and you are somebody. Good write.

-nicole-was-here-

[Jennifer Pennington]

Nicely done my friend. Short, sweet, and straight to the point. But just know you are most certainly needed on this planet....every day that you're alive is a day you are capable of doing just about ANYTHING. So enjoy every moment while you've got it!

[PasDeChat]

First verse is almost Dr Suess like! I think we all feel the need to run and hideaway at times.. the want to be invisible and just go on without anyone noticing. Nice write.

[TeenRomance2]

I like it. In a way it reminds me of the song "How to disappear completely" (Radiohead)