Rage Release

I want to feel strong, powerful
Against this world.
I cannot give up that deep feeling
For anyone.
I want to feel in control of something
Other than myself.
It would be the greatest strength in the world.
A powerful rage, suddenly released.
And I, smiling from the sidelines
Watching it all happen.

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good. I feel your rage. Its so strong! Great poem buddy!

[PasDeChat]

I want to feel powerful for myself.. and rage against the idiots! lol

I like this!

[Carolina Kel]

Another piece I like. :D Very nice girl.