Late Night

It's hot
It's late
I can't stop writing.
I don't know how much I wrote today.
My mind is so patched with thoughts.
I yawn, but I am not tired.
I could stay up all night.
I wrote my mind out
Maybe that's why I seem so confused
And hesitant right now.
I don't know how this day has effected me
But it won't last much longer.

Reviews

[Hailey]

i like this, can relate to this. u did a good job depicting what its like to not sleep. it was a little short but length isnt always important. it flowed nicely, overall u did a good job on this

[Holly O'Brien]

insomnia....it sucks!! (sometimes)....I can relate to this...been having the same problem lately

[mischeif]

Interesting subject to write about. I like how you start it off with two short lines and the last line and how it tyes it all together. Nice job