Thoughts of Death

When I think of suicide
It is your face
That image
That flashes in my mind.
Would you care if I was gone?
Would you be happy?
These thoughts crowd my mind
Because of how you ignore me.
I'm done with the way you treat me
I can't take it anymore.
So, for that
I am done.

Reviews

[Moonflower]

A very strong piece, I have felt this way before. Well said

[BLACKCRUSH]

I like this very much. It reads like a suicide letter which is what I like about it. The part where you said " When I think of suicide it is you face, That image flashes in my mind" I really related to those lines. This sounds like a personal write . It was very deep and brave.