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About my friend Skylar

I can't stop

Thinking about you.

You are what

Keeps me alive.

You keep me

Motivated and stable.

With you by my side

I won't ever take a fall.

You are there

To catch me on the way down.

You won't allow me

To jump bridges

Or buildings.

You say I belong

On the ground.

Glued next to you.

To stay

Forever.

Reviews

[Glenn McCrary�]

Awww I love this it almost made me cry. :(

[artsystyle]

beatiful very nice love it

[Havatara]

I like it. It's simple, sweet, to the point, and shows what you feel about your friend. I wish we all had friends like that.

[PasDeChat]

very nice.. heart felt and .. tender

[Moonflower]

A lovely write~

[Caitlynxoxo]

oh man you've done it again! Such a beautiful poem that keeps me bound to the words until i can't breathe from their powers! WOW! :) This one, suffice to say, was truly magnificent. Whoever this friend of yours is, i highly suggest you keep him close by as you venture further into life because he seems like the perfect companion ;) Really, REALLY beautiful. the only critique i can think of to say is that ...well in all honesty i can't really think of anything. im pretty intoxicated actually because that was a beautiful poem. Possibly work on the grammar? I don't know, but i DO know this is possibly one of my favourite poems i have ever read. Thanks for sharing, and sorry for the long review :P

xoxoxoCaitlynxoxoxo