Nothing to Me Now

Can't sleep.

Don't care.

Not tired.

I don't want you

To fade from my mind.

You mean too much to me

And I miss you.

I wake up

With the sun in my eyes.

You are gone

But my tears aren't flowing.

I have forgotten about you

And you are nothing to me now.

I write these words

In hope

Of never remembering you.

Reviews

[Tomi]

whoever, must have hurt you much.... lovely flow by the way.

[Omar Fendri]

FANTASTIC and so unfathomable ...
the last lines were so touching
:)

[Kes]

Whoa. Conflict! I love it though!
I felt a real knot in my chest when you wrote 'I have forgotten about you', because before everything was the opposite. The protagonist seemed so desperate to hang on to this relationship, this love and then they wake up in the morening and it's just... erased. Like it never happened. I love this, so much...
Great read!

[EMP]

really good poem! i like the flow you get from it, it's sad and i can totally relate to it which makes it even better. well done :)