Tearing Your Picture

I'm looking at your picture

And I want to tear it to pieces.

But a certain feeling

Is holding me back.

I don't know what's come over me.

I just can't do it.

Reviews

[Kesha]

Very short and yet its really good. I like that it was straight to the point and that there seems to be some conflicting feelings there. I just like it. Good write!

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Wow, it's short, sweet and to the point! I was expecting something longer after reading the title, but I really enjoy it's simplicity.

[Sydney Dreama]

I really like it. I think that it is great but maybe is a little to short. I would like to read a little more because to me everything is all there and has some very strong feelings.
other than that very good :)