This Is What I Wanted

You say you hate me

Well guess what?

Baby

That's what I wanted.

I hear you

Slam the door as you leave.

Yes

This is exactly what I wanted.

For us to fall apart

And become extinct.

I always prayed

We never happened.

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

Wow! That was strong and straight-to-the point. Sometimes, one just has to say it as it is.

[Kirby Inc.]

Powerful, succinct, and emotional. Beautiful...

[Moonflower]

biting and cruel, well written.

Oh I just fell in love with this poem. Beautiful and poignant. This made my day.

[Crinkle°]

very strong little poem.

[xxox]

i love this

[Deepshikha]

This feels like both denial and defiance. It's strong and striking.
You might want to fix "dorr", though. Did you mean "door"?
Anyway, striking write.

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. brief and simple yet powerful ... passion has so many hues ... it's unbelievable ... very beautifully poetic use of the word "extinct" ...