This Was the Day

This Was the Day

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

This was the day

I fell apart.

This was the day

I faded away.

The day I felt worthless

Empty.

This was the day

No one understood me.

This was the day

I was invisible to all.

© 2010 I Am Svetlana


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Well done! I like it's conciseness but deep thought as well

Posted 14 Years Ago


short but very passionate.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this, I know everyone feels this sometimes. Very well written.

Luna

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 7, 2010
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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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