Your Eyes

I see it in your eyse.

The fear.

The anxiety.

I say nothing

But stare.

 

Your eyes give a cold stare.

Sends a shiver down my spine.

I stare right back

Glaring into your soul.

 

I wonder what you think about

But your eyes tell me everthing.

Death is what you want.

You don't like it here.

 

Please don't go.

But in your eyes

Death doesn't fade.

 

Reviews

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

i feel the pain and sorrow in this poem it has deep passion in it that i really enjoyed great work

[mamabear]

This is beautiful, congratulations, keep up the good work I look forward to reading more of your work

Mamabear

The previous comment is so true, you have a very authentic quality that separates you from the grove..I really like this piece its gripping and the finish is fantastic well done!

Very nice.

There is something very special about your poetry. You use such simple language but manage to induce much more than simple thoughts and emotions in the reader. THAT is talent.

[James Johnson]

Eyes are cool..But your a good poet :) nice write

[Matthew Kult]

This is a great write, my friend has a weird fascination with people's eyes. He is always talking about seeing people's souls in them. I don't know I just write it off as one of his rants. This was great. Well done.

With Love,

Jaidyn

[Chamil3001]

wow! just amazing!
feels terrible

[chillz]

.... lost for words 0_o ^^great write!

[qaralynn]

absolutely beautiful!!!!

[Wondering Mind]

thought provoking...Now you've got me thinking about death again...