He Can't Be "The One"

He Can't Be "The One"

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

Who is the one

You live for?

The one

You are willing

To bleed for?

He is your life

Your furture.

He is that part of you

You can't lose.

The one you fear

Is too perfect.

He is like no other.

Too different even

To comprehend at times.

You are convinced

He cannot be "the one"

For you.

 

© 2010 I Am Svetlana


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

So sad. It's interesting, because until the last few lines, the reader is expecting that the point of the poem is something else..the opposite. So I like how you turned that around so smoothly.

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

71 Views
1 Review
Added on December 3, 2010
Last Updated on December 4, 2010

Author

I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



About
"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..

Writing