The New Me

I refuse to give up

Just because of you.

You won't break me.

I will stand as strong as thunder.

Strike you like lightniing

If you attempt to hurt me life before.

This is the new me

And I won't be broken

Because of your mistake.

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

I really like the line " I will stand as strong as thunder" . That makes me think you are fighting against a force that has tremendous power .This a short powerful piece , that makes the reader feel the courage of the writer.

[Stacey]

Never give up, grow stronger and wiser from the experience. It hurts, but when you bounce back stronger it's wonderful, liberating and empowering. Bravo to you! Nice write

[futurepast.]

It's only when we realize how much we have been hurt in love that we come to know that we are weak ... and then we decide to stand on our own feet, stop depending on that person, and be stronger than ever to prevent another shadow to befall us.
Nice write.