If only he knew

poem i wrote

If only he knew how crazy he drives me.

If only he knew I like it.

If only he knew I wanted to be his.

If only he knew how broken I am when he's not around.

If only he knew how much I wanted to kiss him.

If only he knew that he means so much too me. 

If only he knew how gorgeous he is.

If only he knew how alone I feel when he isn't here.

If only he knew how I want to be with him.

If only he knew.......

Author's Note

Lemme know what you think

Reviews

[Cari Zahn]

This is interesting! I think you should definitely try elaborating on the situation or perhaps writing another poems that tells more of it. I think what you've written so far is relatable to many people but what would really draw me in is hearing the details that make the situation uniquely yours and his. Keep working but great start!

[EmilyBianca]

Thanks for the advice, much appreciated, I shall check out your stuff sometime :D

[Cari Zahn]

Of course! And that would be so awesome, thank you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:).....................

[EmilyBianca]

very glad you enjoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)..................