I wish there was a God

I wish there was a God

A Story by Monochrome Person
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sorry if this causes any controversy thats not how its intended, its just my own perspective and i can't be judged for my right to an opinion ;) as usual, hope you enjoy and i dont expect feedback x

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I wish there was a God. A person to watch over us and guide us. So someone could write him a message asking for help in this polluted world. To give us hope, a reason for being, a reason to live, a path in life to follow so we all had purpose.
I wish there was a way he could save us all, to stop the hurt and to cure the Earth of everything bad, to nurse it back to good health. To make the human race realise we must bring peace, joy and happiness to the lives of others around us. He could teach us to respect everything that lives, flora and fauna. Only then would the true value of life be recognised.
I wish that he would heal the wounds of people who have soldiered on through life, those who have fought long battles and are struggling to stay standing and put on a brave face for the sake of others. Those who carry scars which will remain with them for a lifetime, imprinted on their souls and on their skin. Not all scars are noticeable.
I wish that he could see that none of us are perfect, we are damaged goods but we still seek perfection. Maybe then he'd let us know beauty still exists, even in those who believe in it the least. To make us feel like we have worth and aren't just waiting for time to pass until we leave this world in hopes of another life to redeem ourselves for this one.
I wish that he would understand we are all lost souls wandering about in the vast emptiness of space, trapped on a small speck of star dust. Our eyes wide shut to the world around us, the small yet important things of everyday we forget to notice. Those things that make our lives enjoyable and happy, even if only for a moment. As simple as a ray of warm sunshine against your face or the sound of rain on the roof.
I wish he existed. To bring us a life so valuable that we all wanted to make the most of every second, to bring everyone together in a harmonious and colourful world with no sadness or pain. Only an empire of love.
Oh how i wish there was a God.

© 2013 Monochrome Person


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Hello :)

I just read this piece and i believe that you're a great writer...May be An Author I think. I was reading this piece from my eyes but feeling your words from my heart indeed. You know what dearest one, I was probably today planning to write one blog to my Magazine... but enable to decide what to write on.
Now i can say, after reading this piece, i've got what i was probing. Actually you've Inspired my by this piece. I'm worrying now if i read your some more stuffs.. couldn't i become your biggest fan... lol
Haha :)

Anyway, glad to know you keep such a nice thinking. Very nice write, even it's a great msg here to keep away from world's all negativity's. "God's still exist.. Beauty's still exist". keep writing "Emily".
Today, you made my day :) I think now your stuffs're forcing me to come back again and write my owns too :P Hahaha :)
Beautiful write "Emily". Don't give up. You're the future of the world. This world needs your Talent... Your possitivity.
A pat on your back from me :)

100/100 :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monochrome Person

6 Years Ago

Wow thank you very much for your kind words! really brought a smile to my face :) means a lot to hea.. read more
Rahul

6 Years Ago

My pleasure dear "Emily" :)
Well, i'm glad i could make smile in your white face... :) Yeh, i .. read more



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very nicely written. spoken from the heart and very noble thoughts. those who believe in god should not/must not get upset. this is not blasphemy, to my mind. what you're wishing for is what evryone is wishing in their heart of hearts. beautiful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Monochrome Person

5 Years Ago

thanks :D I'm glad it isn't being taken as offensive to those who do believe :) because that is defi.. read more
I like this I feel the emotion of your words and I feel like I can hear your voice with a sincere but desperate wish for a peaceful happy world.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very moving and insightful. I don't think you should count yourself out as a writer. A writer's biggest enemy is himself...herself...ah, you get it. Keep on smiling, you got what it takes. We all do. ;D. It's all how you look at it, right?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monochrome Person

6 Years Ago

Thank you! :) and i guess that is true, we are always most critical on ourselves aren't we? thanks f.. read more
This might sound right, so please bare with me. There are moments I feel if there is an Almighty. It must be like a Chairman of the Board. (S**t I hope its Frank Sinatra personally) so it is like, there is someone managing way too much at once.



I fucked that up didnt I?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Monochrome Person

6 Years Ago

i think i get what you mean :) thanks for your review
Hello :)

I just read this piece and i believe that you're a great writer...May be An Author I think. I was reading this piece from my eyes but feeling your words from my heart indeed. You know what dearest one, I was probably today planning to write one blog to my Magazine... but enable to decide what to write on.
Now i can say, after reading this piece, i've got what i was probing. Actually you've Inspired my by this piece. I'm worrying now if i read your some more stuffs.. couldn't i become your biggest fan... lol
Haha :)

Anyway, glad to know you keep such a nice thinking. Very nice write, even it's a great msg here to keep away from world's all negativity's. "God's still exist.. Beauty's still exist". keep writing "Emily".
Today, you made my day :) I think now your stuffs're forcing me to come back again and write my owns too :P Hahaha :)
Beautiful write "Emily". Don't give up. You're the future of the world. This world needs your Talent... Your possitivity.
A pat on your back from me :)

100/100 :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monochrome Person

6 Years Ago

Wow thank you very much for your kind words! really brought a smile to my face :) means a lot to hea.. read more
Rahul

6 Years Ago

My pleasure dear "Emily" :)
Well, i'm glad i could make smile in your white face... :) Yeh, i .. read more
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Posted 6 Years Ago


Monochrome Person

6 Years Ago

Thanks!
Well you won't get any good feedback from the people who believe in God, and you won't get any from the people who don't believe in God and don't want to.

But I wish you could.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Monochrome Person

6 Years Ago

i see what you did there, very clever :)
Woody

6 Years Ago

Very commendable thoughts. "John lennon-y", if I may coin an adjective. I totally agree. Nicely put.
Matthew Ian Herrawood W

5 Years Ago

If I may comment Marie, I DO believe in God and I thought this was wonderfully written. I'm not goin.. read more

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