I See

idk.... i just came up with it... noticing who he really wants and who he really needs becouse of how he treats me. he never listens when i ask him to do something, he just goes back again and un-does what he did

I see how you actually feel
I see what you actually want
I see WHO you actually need
wait should i change that to want.
I see what you need and what you want
wait i should change that to a she.
lets repeat

I see how you actually feel for her
I see what you actually want from her
I see Who you actually want
I see she is the one you want
I see she is the one you need.
I see she is the one for you.

If she could only be me

Author's Note

please forget any grammar problems

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. so brutally honest from your heart.. I have never felt that disposition but if this is real then I feel terrible for you.. if you know that your partner desires another that must hurt horribly.. especially if you think she would be better for him.. grass is always greener on the other side of the fence though.. no such thing as perfection and if you love him dearly try your best to keep his interest.. let him chose but don't encourage it. Thank you so much for sharing this writing.. I am sure there will be others that will relate more on this one.. as people are human and I know this does happen to people.

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I can understand what you are going through .. just forget the past or this damn guy .. consider what i had told you on mail ...

[Vincent A. Beasley]

I've also had this happen to me x0 It's not fun at all. Very well done!

[Cherrie Palmer]

very cute rhyme I like it. if you are reflecting about a lost love in the poem
you might think about adding one more line. for example.. if she could only be me ..
or the like. This was nicely done

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ouch... that's some deep venting... sorry to here your being treated bad..by your guy,great write