My mind

In my mind everything is different

In my mind unicorns are real

Hippos say hello

Monkeys cry

Rainbows fall

And it quite cloudy

Now if you were there

Monkeys would screech

Rainbows would float

And the sun would shine

But no

You got your own mind

And I guess I'm not in that 

Reviews

[TheSweet]

This poem has a lot of potential, I think you could create some wonderful imagery with this if you let more imagination onto the paper. Also, on the second to last line, I'd recommend 'You have your own mind' instead of 'got' - it just reads easier I think.

I'd say this is one of those ones you could keep comming back to at a later date to see how you can change it. Unique :)