Make It Break More.

you i adore

make it break more

deep, deeply

break it sweetly

love like hate

the furthest thing from

if you hate her 

love her

if you love her

break her

make it break more

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

A cool calm and collected look at pretend love - I feel this spoken through gritted teeth and one raised eyebrow.
Make it hurt because that's what love means isn't it - pain and sorrow.
Visceral piece E.M.

[Enigma Monster]

Iiiiiiiinteresting. I like your take on it Tony!

[Tony Jordan]

I like the growl - the intensity of this one E.M.

[JayDee]

Woah... scary

Nicely written Enigma

[Enigma Monster]

Thanks Jaydee. I never thought of it as scary, cool interpretation!

[JayDee]

Hahahaha at first it may not seem so, but if one were to deeply look into those words and the meaning behind it from the readers point of view, its pretty scary haha

[Enigma Monster]

Ok yeah, I can see that. Dark too, lol!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is powerful and fierce.. I don't know if what you have written is what you are feeling too still I liked the ferocity of it..

[Enigma Monster]

Thanks so much! At the risk of sounding all 'artsy' and s**t, I feel everything I write. Some more than others, but it's that feeling that drives me to write it down.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! O think it's better in than out.. I mean the feelings 😉

[Tony Jordan]

YumnKay you mean better out than in...?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol I just noticed I wrote it wrong 😂😂😂 but since you corrected I can leave the comment as a show for everyone to see how silly I am 😂😉

[Enigma Monster]

Hahaha! Oh you guys...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeah this guy here is getting on my nerves 😂😂😂