Something divine.

Something divine.

A Poem by Mehak Mushtaq
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Divine Love.

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"It was when I realized that I love you that you had gone. There's a part of me, a certain part that isn't ready to get over you, that'll forget all the hurt you did, that'll forgive every betrayal, that'll never be willing to be without you, a part that'll always love you:
And you should know how much of me is you,
And how much of me is left.
For, I'll put the rest of what is 
left of me in your hands,
You should see that my soul is a
shadow of me and reflection of you.
"I", is not left and not left alone
For, thee has this part of the whole,
whole.
I wished good. Thee (you and me) wished divine.
I cursed, granted. Thee cursed, blessed."

© 2013 Mehak Mushtaq


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At your ageit is best to remeber that nature cannot tell the difference between love and lust. It is natures demand that you be blinded by it The reason is simple top make us reproduce and stave off exstinction.Love wioll force this on you and wont ease up till you are at least 30 to 35.So enjoy it and try not to suffer too much

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Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Hmm I will keep that in mind. :)



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I find this very obscure, especially the final two lines. I would avoid semantics if I were you, until you can explain yourself in simpler terms.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

hmm I agree. It is obscure. I'll take care of that in future.
At your ageit is best to remeber that nature cannot tell the difference between love and lust. It is natures demand that you be blinded by it The reason is simple top make us reproduce and stave off exstinction.Love wioll force this on you and wont ease up till you are at least 30 to 35.So enjoy it and try not to suffer too much

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Hmm I will keep that in mind. :)
This, to me, speaks almost sadly. It reads as a person falling apart for another. Beautiful, no matter what the message :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unconditional Love is what this is about. A rare poem on love...a gem...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I like the language in this, though I am not sure exactly what it portends to.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

It's an expression of love and faith.
Not feeling this one my friend...
Reads awkwardly to me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Hmm. It's okay.
Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Not all great minds think alike. :)
now your poetry is reaching out to touch that part of me which few ever do....this is directly from the heart, so profoundly beutiful to read and , yes, to feel. magnificent write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Very nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Anytime. :)
This was a bittersweet tale of endless love. It defines human relationships in my perception thought very well. We may love till our very last breath, we may believe we love beyond that too. Sometimes we may give up before we start and sometimes we might give in to something else but a piece of love from every encounter always lingers, sometimes it might be sowed deep within the self never to show face again but always there and someday a reminder of better or worse days. You're writing depicts true emotion and meaning and sparks a flame in the readers mind and heart which makes it be cautious about how love works but still wants to explore it so badly and the whole fact that a reader can reflect and question his perception of an authors work is brilliance. So if none of that made sense to you all I want to say is I loved the poem it had meaning to me and was a wonderful write. Great job. -Kee.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

:) No, I haven't even heard of it. :/
KeeD

11 Years Ago

Oh :D cool it might be something that interests you if you ever get the chance to read it or watch a.. read more
Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Oh, I will look it up.
A beautiful write. One that could probably use a bit of formatting, otherwise it is solid.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

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Tags: Part, Part of me, Over, Get over you, Over you, Hands, Soul, Reflection, Shadow, Thee, Whole, Cursed, Blessed, Divine.

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Mehak Mushtaq
Mehak Mushtaq

Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India



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