Divine Union ~ Twin Flame

My blood replaces ink,
Heart replaces fingers
Ecstasy replaces tactile,
Ishtar replaces human
As we collide.
Honey replaces tears,
Redolence replaces breath
Souls replace shadows,
Reflection replaces soul
As we unite.
Passions replaces vision,
Rhythm replaces movements
Ardor replaces sense
when blaze replaces flesh,
You turn divine.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

carefully written with (mostly) three word lines that make this fast - well thought through..

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

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Loved the poem, and the replacements! Great write. :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

HAHA, glad you replaced 'gross' with 'great'.

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Hahah, lol.