Bridge Haven

Some friends let us borrow their Russian River/Jenner Beach, CA retreat for a couple of days - ode to the hideaway!

Just before bridge

To Jenner

Russian River Retreat

Secret Shangri-La

 

Foliage frolicks

Hidden Hideaway

 

Six shadow shells

Watching wisely

Flickering fires

 

Into the night

Into the day

 

Dreamily driving

Cooing coastal

Brewing beers

 

Into the day

Into the night

 

Supreme supper

Regal rendezvous

Just after bridge

To Jenner

 

Victorious Vacation Visceral

Secret Shangri-La

Reviews

[black_rose_obsession]

"Dreamily driving

Cooing coastal

Brewing beers"
I really like these lines! I never would have described drving with 'dreamily' I suppose it's a bit out of my league of thought, I think this piece its really beautiful!

I can see you have a wide vocabulary and it's great to see your putting it to such good use! I love the flow of this too it's peaceful and very smooth, wonderful! keep up the good work!

[Charles]

Also looks like a Haiku influence. I've done a few like this but they are not my favorites - nothing quite compares to the more traditional Japanese style.

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

I really love the imagery and places that are mentioned here. It reminds me of a fairytale and fantasy. I love the language used...beautiful =]

[Thorn]

Shangri-La= awesome choice of wording!
I loved this. Well done!