Dreams

An odd analogy I decided to turn into a poem.

Dreams are like soap bubbles.

They float freely and gaily.

Going where wind takes them.

Wondrous and tempting.

 

But to catch one is never easy.

Grab too quick, and the bubble will burst,

A major chord turned minor,

 And falls apart.

 

But reach too slow,

And it floats away

Never to be seen Again

 

Catch one, and you are cleansed

But it takes more than one.

Reviews

[Alskar]

What a beautifully, -dreamy- poem this is. It literally feels as though you're dancing along in a dream when you read this. The delicate nature and lightness of the soap bubble analogy work really well in capturing the essence of a dream. I love this.

[ScaryTrees]

i can never catch them
my hands are too big

nice write

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Intriguing metaphor on dreams. Now, what about those damned nightmares?

[Ruth]

Unique manner of expressing dreams, beautifully voiced love! xx

[cfix]

This is really quite the write and interesting. I enjoyed the read.

[Lindsey]

Well thats an interesting thing to say. It's kind of similar to the way people think but still unique. Good job!