Letting Go

You take one last breathe and you let go.

Slowly your fingers slip off of the rail.

The wind blows in your face, your hair flowing far behind you.

You close your eyes, and a single tear runs down your cheek.

Arms spread out, and a wave of relief goes over you.

Finally free.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Nice piece, i can again see reality in your words. It's a short and smooth piece that can be relate with those person's who seem lonliness and all over the day fee alone. Those who're in pain, this piece can make them a bit emotional but strong as well.
Well written.

[OTownPete]

Oh if only it were that simple and lovely

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow, that made my heart race. Its very saddening, but the imagery is grand.

[Erica]

Thank you. Its what i often think of doing.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Well, I hope writing continues to give you a release. I hope you start to feel that isn't an option, or doesn't have to be.