Eternally

Eternally

A Poem by ErisedK

You'll never know what I truly want,
For my love undoable apple of Eden,
I have a sin that I always say in my rant,
Bigger than my love will shock you even.

Always I know that forever I shan't love,
O' I've blundered for truly care for you,
Sinner as I must pay and must serve,
This eternal punishment put me into blue.

Find another you must seek happiness,
Person you're looking definitely is not me,
She will tend your heart cure like a nurse,
You will be okay one day you shall see.

© 2018 ErisedK


Author's Note

ErisedK
What I feel till the end.

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I sense a deep compassion, love for another over self, and willingness to set free a dear love to find a happiness beyond the writer's grasp. It's a sad tale but inspires affection. Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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ErisedK

6 Years Ago

Thank you for review.

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