Evolution of the worm

Evolution of the worm

A Poem by Ecstasè

I've always wondered when I'll hit it
Exploring of the jungle flooded my mind
I loved when you showed me around
That's not possible any more is it?

I should stop talking to you
The vines were weaker without you
You were always naive
Then again

I missed you a lot
Why won't you die
If only I knew you more
I despise you

Each breath of air I inhale
Is a reminiscence of you
In the end my time has only gone to waste
There's still something I don't understand

Why is the sand
So soft down here

© 2014 Ecstasè


Author's Note

Ecstasè
My first piece of writing here, any criticism is greatly appreciated.

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Added on September 7, 2014
Last Updated on September 7, 2014
Tags: Personality, tragedy, fall, betrayal, change

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Ecstasè
Ecstasè

London, South England, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm a 17 year old guy. I'm a bit new to writing so please review my pieces and give me some feedback, all feedback I receive is greatly appreciated. more..