She Won't Stop Changing

Women should be well-rounded

Please

don’t fix your cooked face,

re-align a smile.

 

Forget

that crack-pot, quack doc;

the creature, the retch,

the eager-to-lecture letch.

 

Enter:

a cavalcade of interchangeable women,

a bevy of forgettable goddesses.

 

Seeping entities

gleefully populating what’s left of nothing.

Ever-blending and bending to whim

Each left plastered with a plastic pout.

 

How they hide amongst each other.

But a sanctuary is simply a tolerable prison.

Reviews

[Loner]

Real deep in meaning nice on the whole!

[.]

dry and dark in humour but with a powerful message..

[Moflo]

"But a sanctity is simply a tolerable prison" -brilliant.

[No use.]

realistic dry-ness in an ever disconnecting world of mutable voice and constant horror~

[J.e.s.s.i.c.a]

This poem is very straightforward and easy to understand while still stay creative. Great job!

[Poetic Beauty]

Plastic surgery is something that I won't get. Now to have whiter teeth or maybe some day fix my teeth is a little different. I love the concept of this poem and the flow is easy to follow.