Dry my tears inside

Husband starts to see his wife slowly change . Becoming distance perhaps love has faded. Maybe she doesn't know what she really wants in her life. He is hurt and misses her love but she leaves him .

I don't know what I've done wrong.
She is changing ,she is hurting inside.
I can't change her mind and I can't heal her heart.
I don't know what I've done wrong but I will try to change her mind.
Each day I awake her heart is parting ways and her clothe is gone one by one just like that.
I'm loosing my mind ,crying inside.
Don't hurt us anymore, please come back .
Dry my tears that are hiding inside, I'm trying to be strong not for me but for us.
This morning the sun didn't rise and you were gone.
Nothing left  but my tears inside.
Please come back, let's try this again.
I don't know what I've done wrong but she's gone .
Dry my tears that are hiding inside .

Author's Note

Ignore spelling please. I wrote this "poem" as a song and would love to one day have a country singer sing it. I think it would be a great country song. Please let me know what you think :)

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and it would be a top ten !