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Dancing with Death

Dancing with Death

A Poem by Esther Night
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This is a sonnet. I wrote this when I was studying Shakespear. I hope you like it and I love to hear from yall

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My Dance with Death

 

 

 

 

What is it like to die young in a date?

Is there complete quiet with no  uproar?                                     

Or could there be music, that is one great?

For that the dancing tale that I must gloar.    

 

Her ball room is seen by the candle lights

It's dark and cold yet kinda of painless

The great music, from the middle age nights

She walks among a lifeless and black dress

 

She'll take your'll hand to dance in her gain

A dance you won't know, cause there you have no right

You spin not knowing the cause of your pain

Then you fall, eyes closed, the light of white

 

  Now, a ghost remembering my last breath

  I tell about my dance with lady death

 

I tell about my dance with lady death

 

I tell about my dance with lady death

I tell about my dance with lady death

© 2011 Esther Night


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It really perked my attention how you handled this topic, it was really pure poetry that I cannot fault.

1. You spin not knowing the cause of your pain
2. Now, a ghost remembering my last breath

You somehow manged to make rhyming seem generous and easy to me, it's rare you know.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Now, a ghost remembering my last breath

I tell about my dance with lady death


A splendid read and write...:)...............

Posted 6 Years Ago


Esther Night

6 Years Ago

Thank you, it means a lot to me
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................
I love the dark twist at the end
I tell you about my dance with lady death ..... I can get over that line it runs chills up my spine thats my favorite line through out the poem it was very clever and we'll thought up

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Esther Night

6 Years Ago

Thank you, it means a lot to me

It really perked my attention how you handled this topic, it was really pure poetry that I cannot fault.

1. You spin not knowing the cause of your pain
2. Now, a ghost remembering my last breath

You somehow manged to make rhyming seem generous and easy to me, it's rare you know.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I'm very impressed. We studied sonnets at school, and my teacher told me half the rules of a sonnet and I was already lost. I could not write a sonnet for the life of me, so brownie points for you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 4, 2011
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