Wolf's Song

 

 

your real family shall be your light
to illuminate through the dark depths
don't give in with out a fight
ill be there for you when you have nothing left

i shall be the pillar that keeps you strong
if you feel the wind in your hair just know I'm always there
remember me when you hear the wolfs song,
and most of all know that we all care


 

Reviews

[Eternity_Wolf]

yes u were right tawnee

[Michelle Grayson]

I like the energy your poem has, for the nature of a wolf is very protective and family oriented. Always looking after it's pack, wether they are family or friends. They see the world with a keen sense of realness and often have a keener sense into what is beyond the mainstream of life.

The piece did have a ? pop into my mind on line two of stanza two. "If feel the wind?" Was there supposed to be a "You" in there? Or just starting it with "Feel" would make that line flow much smoother.

Keep up the deep feeling work!

Tawnee

[Hello, Goodbye]

I love the constant workings of the 'Wolf Theme'. This serves as a great anthem to the concept. I loved it much, great job on this.