a Cheater

a Cheater

A Poem by VertoAtrum
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Some people can't stay happy with one person. Some love the thrill of a new experience. It's like an addiction, and I have suffered.

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A player or user has no rules and contracts

We end in the previous, and move to the next act

Our emotions run thin like a tropical ice

In love and in war, we're the wounds that are sliced

Desecrate and decimate, our lovers' demise

There is no soul when you look in our eyes

We smother all feelings and kiss with a bite

Ferocious and cunning, like a wolf in the night

We'll leave you in shambles and chop you to bits

We'll cut ties and break bonds, if that is what fits

In the end we'll just chuckle and throw you away

And move to the next one, and start a new day

© 2014 VertoAtrum


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This piece was very precise, I can sense the selfish, uncaring mindset of the perpetrator., but to all cheaters they too will one day meet their match.
Good job again my friend..It inspires me to post a piece that would complement this one, I will invite you to read it shortly..


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VertoAtrum

10 Years Ago

This used to describe me, but I've made progress to make sure it doesn't happen again. It really can.. read more
Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

It's titled Don Juan meets La Femme Fatale..thanks for the inspiration :)



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Interesting how people hold onto things that become powerfully destructive to themselves and their environment. I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done here, looking forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. A very descriptive piece. Nice work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece was very precise, I can sense the selfish, uncaring mindset of the perpetrator., but to all cheaters they too will one day meet their match.
Good job again my friend..It inspires me to post a piece that would complement this one, I will invite you to read it shortly..


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VertoAtrum

10 Years Ago

This used to describe me, but I've made progress to make sure it doesn't happen again. It really can.. read more
Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

It's titled Don Juan meets La Femme Fatale..thanks for the inspiration :)

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Added on January 25, 2014
Last Updated on January 25, 2014
Tags: cheater, liar, player, sex, affair, routine, deceit, addiction

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My name is Matthias. I am 24 years old. I'm a Leo. Also an ENTP. My passions include writing, drawing, music, and psychology. I have been writing since I was very young. Sci-fi, fantasy, and horro.. more..

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