Haiku-I'm Sorry

I'm going through a separation, slow and painful, and most of it is my fault. It hurts.

I'm sorry for me

For the way I betrayed you

It's all my damn fault

 

You gave me your world

I broke it over my knee

I am broken too

 

There's nothing left now

But maybe we can still be,

Close as friends can be

Reviews

[Shekinah2015]

All I can tell you is to cut out the swear words. Other than that, I'm sorry about what you're going through.

[VertoAtrum]

Sometimes words like that are needed to truly express the strength of the emotion.