Long Haiku-Urges

There is not a day
That I don't think about sex
It corrupts my mind

I need it, I crave
Push me on my back, choke me
Satisfy my urge

Roughly or softly
I won't be mad if you leave
When the deed is done

My skin burns with lust
Lips are chapped from heavy breath
My tongue is searching

Need you to need me
Please let me be your master
I want my control

Blood drips from our skin
Sweat pours from all of our pores
Grins on our faces

Bodies tangled tight
The smell intoxicating
And from it I'm drunk

Need to feel alive
I don't ever want to stop
I really need to f**k

Reviews

[Shane Blackheart]

This is definitely an intense poem. I even want to say it sounds like it's from my own heart, like something I'd probably be tempted to write. I like letting my passions take control of my hands and I just let go on the keyboard, which usually produces some interesting writing. With that said, it's fair to say that I liked this :)