young man.

young man, young man

brought up from the cracks in the pavement, where there's no hope flowers will grow

young man, young man

whose eyes silently beg for you to help him

while his strong voice says different 

young man, young man

doesn't believe in a God

but prays for the blunt to take him far away

young man, young man

who has made good friends with my soul

don't you know you are the breeze that plays across my face?

young man, young man

don't you know everyone needs help?

young man,

i can read right through you 

your certainty bleeds doubt and confusion

young man,

take a good look in the mirror

one day you will see what i see

a King.. born into the struggle

young man, young man

who only sees the dark parts

recognize,

your heart is a bright gold light

do not let the black vines intertwine

let my words find their way into your bloodstream,

into your heart,

do not let the black vines intertwine

young man, young man

how do you always find my sweet spot?

young man, young man

your mind is breathtakingly beautiful 

take me up in that hot air balloon 

i want to see your everything

young man, young man

breaking hearts will not mend yours

young man, young man

your hands can build a world

i believe it in my bones

"young man trying to hold the world in a broken hand, trying to find the world in a broken hand"

let me help.

Author's Note

dear men and women who love men,
dear everyone,
what do you think?

Reviews

[SammMG]

It's sad when you know someone that you desperately want to help, and they seem deaf to everything that you say. They just try to make themselves numb to everything around, and it just breaks your heart. This is just personal to me, makes me think of a dear friend of mine. Young man, young man...great job. Grabs the emotion from the beginning and never once does it have hope leave. Keep up the great work.