Hearts Pool

Become lost in its sea...

Hearts Pool
Once more into the hearts pool 

The calming waters of serenity

It washes over our skin 

Cleansing of our anguish 

We are pulled by passions current 

Pushed by waves of desire 

We dive further still
 And drown within lust...

Reviews

[Jack...]

You are very talented my friend. This is beautiful, serene and filled with the heart's desires. Nicely done.

[Eva Rosehill]

Thank you, it really means a lot, especially from such a talented poet such as yourself.

[Jack...]

Oh Eva, just look above at your poem, that is talent my friend. You are very welcome.

[Tristan Bond]

passionate and romantic, you have captured your theme by taking your words from tenderness into love.

[Diamond]

Beautiful, well done. Love your last line...'and drown within lust...'.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Such fools are we, never shall we learn! Such a lovely stirring of emotion, Eva!

[Eva Rosehill]

I am glad that you understand my work! It means a lot to me, thank you.