A Poem by EverEmma

Darkness fades
Forever has no beauty

Words written in blood
Drip down the stem of life
Glimmer in the moonlight

I fly
Into the unforgiving night
Silver beacons rain down on me

A wrinkle in time
Love has no price
Charming malice

Misty daylight
Unknown dreams

© 2010 EverEmma

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ohhh I really like this..its dark but beautifully written.

Posted 13 Years Ago

you are a great writer...this is good

Posted 13 Years Ago

Dark images, deep words. The deep and dark combination. The title invited me to read about: vengeance, while I sensed there's more to it than just that. It goes way in...I'm unable to explain further, but anyway that's how I interpreted this poem. Interesting write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

nicely done....just as right percentage of emotions showed, not too much but not also to little..good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Good write but I can't relate title to the piece itself

Posted 13 Years Ago

A honest betrayal of the hearts desire to right a wrong Id say

Posted 13 Years Ago

it is very beautiful~Emma~ the metaphors themselves are delicate dabs of hues on your poetic canvas~ for me personally it went into a darker shade of the L'Engle's Wrinkle in Time series pulled out and through into today between the ghostly fingertips of a girl stiching up the past~ beautiful~

Posted 13 Years Ago

I enjoyed this piece! Good write!

Posted 13 Years Ago

very good i really liked it great work i hope to see more when i unblock read requests on my profile


Posted 13 Years Ago

beautiful! simple words by a lot of depth...

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on June 30, 2010
Last Updated on July 2, 2010



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