Bleeding Heart

whispers of love songs surround my soul

and with a needle it pricks my bleeding heart

it's like an open wound where the contents pour

and drain all that fills it so lusciously

the pain that consumes me

the hurt that beat so bad

it's flowing like a river

a river where the dam has been shattered

and soon becomes an ocean

an ocean of tears,sorrow,and blood

it fills the dry lands like a tsunami

a hurricane in my rib cage

how is there so much?

it seems as though it'll never stop

and then it does

and my soggy heart will never be filled again

Reviews

[Adam :P]

vivid, and beautifal.

[misha]

Great job. Very vivid

[TeardropsOnMyHeart]

WOW! your writing is incredable! its absolutely refreshing to read a peice of writing like this. your sense of poetry is incredable. And the analogies are amazing.
beautiful poem!