Closing Set

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Thrumming bumblebees' flight distorted and slow

bass heavy traces, trails of sweat, praise be the valkyrie

wandering aimlessly on her ethereal angel's wings

a pale woman on Pegasus to gather the,

fallen, think for me, of deeper, darker sleep

than even kings in their undiscovered jungle dens might know

unseen by the eyes of men and all the things their memories might show

what alien fascination of nature to recall an animal's lifetime

in the wild, among houses of caves and skyscraping fauna

where the temperature on the floor thick with vines

is hot and heavy with steam, condensation gathers on the lungs

like breathing in a perpetual sauna, perception gathers on man's tongues

deception of his meager imagination laid on the ears

croaking, groaning stalks of unknown life

turning one's own mind into a parasite

making a mirror of insight inside, reflecting back on fears

Goodbye tore open the sky, a fist through the ribcage

a bolt through the squall line

in a moment, Pangea on the ceiling above Earth

a nightmare remembered, reflected and projected

shown to this creative ocean of life below

the endless thick of Jaguar, Panther, Tiger and Lion

whose eyes shine in the green that is bunched together black- like diamonds

striking a matchhead, the phosphorous tip of a finger

the kiss from a lip of one oblong, impossible, obscure God

splitting the last pure retreat from the disdainful nonsense of humans

in an environment where only so few can survive,

play us out on a high note, rest in peace assured

with a mutual trust, man isn't mind, no one leaves this universe alive.

Reviews

[keith]

evilhappy ... a marriage between avatar/free form write
this is a great read with rhythmic song of allure
a spoken word read that catches a ride with your companion imagination
veryfukinkool