Revelation

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Secrets are secret


Truth cannot expound


Everything is vanity


No comfort to be found





Truth is relative


or so it is, they say


Life for us is short


no time to dry the hay





What Truth will illumine


Lies would then conceal


with ebony tusks uncover


wounds that would not heal

 

 

 

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Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Exceptional, a piece in so few words able to illuminate truth. Even with it's brevity you're able to show the struggle of truth and lies and the ever present pressure of time. A conflict that is continued and highlighted with "ebony tusks". Great wording, meter and flow. Brilliant

[redd Brick Keshner]

I am most grateful to you for your kind words of comment. Cheers.

[Lara]

The economy and line breaks sprinkle gospel with ecclesiastes in a sheet of resounding Truth.
Smart and concise.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thank you so much Lara. This is one of the old time faves. You have brought it back to life, and for that you are greatly appreciated🕊️🙏🏻

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

wisdom and exceptionally well drawn imagery really deliver this poetic straight home to the reader~

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thank you kindly. I am glad the poem has successfully carried this across. Cheers.

[Kerry O'Connor]

I love the image of the ebony tusks - really stark and strong. Another great piece :)

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thank you Kerry. Your fine opinion is always most welcome.