a vantaged perch
A Poem by redd Brick Keshner
© 2023 redd Brick Keshner
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Paints quite a lovely picture, I love pigeons so I may be a little biased.
I think the formatting could use some work, but that's all.
One thing, the last two lines, for me, didn't flow as well as the rest, but that's a minor criticism.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thanks Doug 🙏🏻 Your visit and thoughts are important and well appreciated.
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Added on November 18, 2023
Last Updated on November 18, 2023
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redd Brick KeshnerBrisbane, West Moreton, Australia
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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..
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