a vantaged perch
A Poem by Red Brick Keshner
© 2023 Red Brick Keshner
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Paints quite a lovely picture, I love pigeons so I may be a little biased.
I think the formatting could use some work, but that's all.
One thing, the last two lines, for me, didn't flow as well as the rest, but that's a minor criticism.
Posted 5 Months Ago
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5 Months Ago
Thanks Doug 🙏🏻 Your visit and thoughts are important and well appreciated.
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Added on November 18, 2023
Last Updated on November 18, 2023
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Red Brick KeshnerBrisbane, West Moreton, Australia
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My life is one poetic journey. If I am not reading or writing poetry, I simply live it. To me the experience of poetry should be such - to breathe it, create it, and receive it from poems and lives th.. more..
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