a farewell to friendship’s muse

There is somewhere you belong,
a realm where the echoes of your youth
dance with the whispers of time.
As a wee one, you wielded words,
the mystery of thoughts made tangible-
not just happenstance,
but purpose, power, a pulse
running through each phrase,
each heartbeat recorded,
etched in the canvas of your heart.

Lift your soulful gaze,
eyes ignited, ablaze,
travel back to that moment-
the bedimpled smile,
the laughter swirling like autumn leaves.
Face the sunrise that beckons,
the bold step forward,
tear-stained cheeks,
yet still, the joy remains.
For in each line lies a journey,
a truth that screams:
words unwritten leave us incomplete,
less than whole without you.

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

Oh!Yes! I can imagine that Aussie accent in these verses!

This is magnificent! Beautiful! I could never weave words into such beauty...

Have you considered recording your verses to be heard online? Powerful stuff, Red? Brick? Keshner? You go by one or all three? ...I'm just G

[redd Brick Keshner]

Once I find a suitable voice actor willing to record these, that is always a possibility. Thanks 🙏🏻

[ETERNITY]

YOU should do the voice, Brick! YOUR voice I imagine is amazing!

Please consider!