A dragon basks in my stew, scales glinting with heat Steam curls, weaving tales of daring quests Potatoes anchor islands, thickening the plot Carrots float like tiny boats on a spicy sea Pepper flames flicker, igniting bold flavours Onions create layers of intrigue Garlic breathes magic Stew simmers bold.
Spoon stirs, dragon flares Bubbles pop with mystery Savoury secrets blend- Courage takes a bite.
Hello Red,
I love to cook, occasionally.
I love to eat, all the time.
I love your poem.
It reflects both a skillful use of language by a seasoned poet, and a joyful innocent imagination such as a child might possess. More simply, it made me smile, made me want to cook. Nice poem, really! MSB
Posted 3 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Perhaps at a certain age we somehow return to the simpler joys and revisit the basics, like mealtime.. read morePerhaps at a certain age we somehow return to the simpler joys and revisit the basics, like mealtimes and food preparation. Thank you kindly MSB, no MSG here 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
Hello Red,
I love to cook, occasionally.
I love to eat, all the time.
I love your poem.
It reflects both a skillful use of language by a seasoned poet, and a joyful innocent imagination such as a child might possess. More simply, it made me smile, made me want to cook. Nice poem, really! MSB
Posted 3 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Perhaps at a certain age we somehow return to the simpler joys and revisit the basics, like mealtime.. read morePerhaps at a certain age we somehow return to the simpler joys and revisit the basics, like mealtimes and food preparation. Thank you kindly MSB, no MSG here 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
I love that second stanza, this is amazing
Love the imagery
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Months Ago
Indeed, and so glad you said so yourself! That means that I wasn’t just dreaming it 👍🏻🕊th.. read moreIndeed, and so glad you said so yourself! That means that I wasn’t just dreaming it 👍🏻🕊thanks kindly👍🏻🙏🏻
How creative this was with great imagery. Although I’d be a bit suspect if a dragon was in my stew! I’m glad the stew was good. I found much symbolism and an unwritten theme in this piece. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Months Ago
I would too, in it or on it! Glad that you found unbreathed themes and symbolism- that is so amazing.. read moreI would too, in it or on it! Glad that you found unbreathed themes and symbolism- that is so amazing to hear! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..