Who Are You?

Just another Ex

"Oh" you're

Mr. Jealousy
The one who points out the waiter taking my order first, or who said my gynecologist was a lesbian and  obviously had the hots for me? 

"Oh" you're

The Bully
The man who grabbed my arm, pulled my hair, sat me down, and said "Do Not"

Who smiled outdoors and beats a women inside
"Oh" you're

The Two-Timer
The one who so kindly volunteers to drive my drunken female friend back to her condo, then call and say you fell asleep on her couch
"Oh" your're
The Betrayed
The one who always made me feel guilty, great at reverse psychology but used it not for good, but for torment.
"Oh" your're
Now just the Ex
The one "i no longer take anger, pain, and mistreats from"
Another dandelion seed head the wind blew

Author's Note

comment :)

Reviews

[Emrick]

Great idea.

[Faffy]

this is just raw emotion and power. your words a flushed red with anger and contempt its absolutely empowering, loved it all the way to the end

-Roshan =)

[Ed Fagan]

filthy! rotten! ... the subject not the write. well done.

[Becca Bishop]

Well put. Righteous anger, in my opinion. Wow, I'm mad and I don't even know the person in the poem. Grrrr >:( Good write!!

[M.M.I]

A revealing piece about the objectification of women. It is a truth that you speak of. Nicely put.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Powerful, and very true about some men who, sadly enough, make their women more like pets than human. You really, really express all of your ideas very well. Nice job and keep writing

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Wow, this was intense.. I like the ending though, someone like that definitely deserves to be an ex. One critique though.. All of the lines that say: "Oh" your ... should say: "Oh" you're

Beautiful job with this though, this is a great poem,thanks for sharing (:

[EvErEyEs]

very true, thank you :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

No problem (:

[Sid]

Nicely worded poem, I really like the ending...great write, I really enjoyed reading this!!

[de_maruf]

ending part is excellent

[The Refined Poet]

the last line is perfect, loved the imagery... sums it up nicely.