Last Breath

Year poem was written: 2012

                    Suffering has nearly come to an end.

                               The waters of pain almost dry.

                    Peace and complete tranquility charging closer.

                               Faith bringing it's reward.

 

                    The angel of death coming with eternal bliss.

                               Not fear.

                    Life begins to slowly and quietly fade away.

                               The soul ready to be in blessed light.

 

                    Timid life elegantly ends with,

                               the last breath.

Reviews

[James Tincher]

a calm and peaceful description of moving on. gave the angel of death a soft side, more like an escort to the light. very nice...

[fiery-san]

This is a very relaxing and peaceful poem. Nice. ^_^

[Ezekiel Silver]

Thank you!

[Marie]

This is quite lovely--a gentle way of dying.

Do not make the posssessive "its" a contraction of "it is".