The Ruins Of Sin

The Ruins Of Sin

A Poem by Ezekiel Silver
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Year poem was written: 2012

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                  The ruins of sin hold old rage. 
                  The ruins of sin hold old torment. 
                  The ruins of sin hold old anger. 
                  The ruins of sin hold old suffering. 
                The ruins of sin were struck down by faith. 
     The ruins of sin were struck down by faith. 

© 2012 Ezekiel Silver


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This was a great poem. I can agree with it...but I also have to say.."Excercise your faith in God." As the Bible says because whoever excercises faith in him will be forgiven for thier sins. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


To be honest, I myself do not see the moral, the message, of this poem and how each line relates to that moral. What is the signifigance of the bolding, repeat of the last line?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Faith takes away all sin.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Ezekiel Silver
Ezekiel Silver

Nampa , ID



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I'm just a lonely young man who's recently graduated high school hoping to make a difference in people's lives with my work. Also, Ezekiel Silver is not my real name but one of two pen names I made. more..

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